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Planning Blog: Script

Here is the shooting script and the sound script for my final task


Sound script:

Scene 1:

    Train honks

    Noise of people walking around and getting off the train

Scene 2:

    Noise of girl walking on concrete   

    Text notification noise

Scene 3:

    Music comes in through headphones (levels by Louie Zong)

    Achievement noise

Scene 4: 

    No dialogue

    Levels by Louie Zong

Scene 5:

    Car honking

    Levels by Louie Zong

Scene 6:

    No Dialogue

    Bass Boss by Louie Zong

Scene 7:

    Worker: "Watch where you're going!"

    Katy: "Oh, sorry."

Scene 8:

    No Dialogue

    The Lost Library by Louie Zong

Scene 9:

    "Hey mom, I'm home!"

    Music gets slightly softer

Scene 10:

    "Sometimes it feels like you're the only one who understands me..."

    Cat purring

    Music is nearly gone now

Scene 11:

    No Dialogue

    Ruffling of bag, moving of books, placing things down

Scene 12:

    No Dialogue


Shooting script:

1:

Starts with an opening shot of a train passing

Pan as the train starts to stop in the station

Katy walks towards the kiosk and swipes her card

Diegetic sound: Train honking, the bustle of the station, noise over intercome

Nondiegtic sound: none

2:

Katy stops to text her phone

Messages between Mom and Katy

"Video game task started" on top of the screen

Diegetic sound: text ding

Nondiegtic sound: Video game achievement noise

3:

Katy starts walking and then stops to put in headphones

as she continues walking she starts dancing a bit

Diegetic sound: footsteps, music

Nondiegtic sound: glitching noises

4:

Katy starts walking around the train station

She stops as the traffic light starts appearing as it's glitching

Diegetic sound: footsteps, glitching noises

Nondiegtic sound: none

5:


Diegetic sound:

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6:


Diegetic sound:

Nondiegtic sound:

7:


Diegetic sound:

Nondiegtic sound:


Diegetic sound:

Nondiegtic sound:

8:


Diegetic sound:

Nondiegtic sound:

9:


Diegetic sound:

Nondiegtic sound:

10:


Diegetic sound:

Nondiegtic sound:

11:


Diegetic sound:

Nondiegtic sound:

12:

  Diegetic sound:  Steps towards game, noise of game starting up





Until next time, Danniella Miller signing off. :)


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